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Smoke it for the insides
And shock me with your truth
Let me tell you my dear friend
I never used to lose
My mechanics never worked this way
Technicalities gone dumb
Even since I got torn up
My receptors have gone numb
So I'll turn you down for something new
I'm never lonely when I'm alone
I've become my own best friend
Building up my tome
I'm shiny in my rebirth
Alive and attractive for my peers
Rising up like the new Aphrodite
Resting all the unknown fears
Press me like a dainty flower
The day is dawning bright and new
Try me on like you know you want to
And I'll be good to you
Opened my eyes and now I see
It's not dark where I stand tall
Hands caress my thought-out nature
And I know I will not fall
Smoke it up for my mind speak
Relax my attitude
Breathe it in to celebrate
Something old gone new
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Written on the 18.08.08

About my rebirth....obviously :)

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:iconazngrrl:
Doll,I have to hand it to you.
This, obviously, is your most powerful poem, I love it. I love your rebirth :)
:iconaedammair-feline:
Lol I love my rebirth too.
And thank you very much, for the fave also :heart:
You're so precious babe.

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:iconazngrrl:
You're welcome.
Aww thanks, you're a strong and precious person :heart:
:iconaedammair-feline:
:) Thank you.
Love ya darl.

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:iconazngrrl:
of course, i love ya too ^^
:iconaedammair-feline:
Thanks ^^
I appreciate it bubsy :heart:

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:iconazngrrl:
Of course, I'm here to support and read your beautiful poems ^^
:iconaedammair-feline:
Well thanks darl.
I posted a new story too ^^
It's one I did for Uni.

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..:skullbones: Aedammair-Feline :skullbones:..

I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name.......
:iconazngrrl:
I read it a few minutes ago, and I have to say, it's good.
It pulled me in, I like the way you describe the settings
and also how you arranged the dialogue.
what is Uni, if I may ask?

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